Leaf stories

Room 1have been writing stories about the leaves feel, they sounds that they make and the co ours they are. After we had recorded the words that described the leaves we went outside and got to play in the dry, spiky, purple, crunchy leaves.


Mr Robb threw leaves over us so we could feel how the leaves felt as they fell down. They were soft, crunchy and lite as they rained down on us.





We put the leave into a big pile and lay down on top of the leaves. We then moved our arms and legs so that we could make leaf angels.


"Mr Robb put Lise in the pile of leaves. The leaves were crunchy and as they fell they look like a helicopter" (James Uelese).

"We went outside to play with the leaves today at school and Mr Robb threw the leaves at us. They were crunchy and hard" (Emalyn Pulega).

"This morning we played with the leaves and we made a leaf angel with brown leaves. We threw and kicked the leaves and they were crunchy and stuck on us. They twirled and floated on the grass" (Timora Ingham).

"We went outside this morning and we played with leaves and it was fun and with the leaves we threw the leaves, the wirley, crunchy leaves twisted down" (Lise Kirwan).

"I kicked the leaves and I like the leaves twirling and falling down on me. It felt soft and crunchy" (Bailey Searle).

"This morning Mr Robb played with the pile of leaves. He threw the leaves at me and they fell down. The leaves were scratchy" (Tino Lenitua).

"I lay in the leaves and made leaf angels" (Jana Bucag).

"I made a leaf angel outside. It was soft and ticklish" (Teddy Amde).

"We played with crunchy leaves pile outside today. The leaves were crunchy and soft. I made a leaf angel" (Olivia Ware).

"I kicked the leaves in a pile. the leaves floated down to the ground" (Bailey Flattery- Donohoe).

These are some of the fantastic stories that Room 1 have been writing over the last few story writing lessons, learning to write narrative stories using descriptive words to give the reader a visual picture for their stories.